Lone Star is a independent crowd funded comic book that just came out. Creator and writer Doug Garrett asked for reviews so I decided to have a look at the book and make something he could use to promote the series.

The hardest thing about looking at something like this is that it’s clear all parties involved are green and need more blood in the mud to round out their skills and develop a voice. So you can’t come at it with complete all knowing high horse attitude. To me the real skill of discussions like this is to narrow down what could be improved right away to make the next issue the best it can be.

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